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Author: Dreamflower
Title: There and Back Again
Rating: G
Theme: Pairs (drabbles)
Elements: beginning, end
Summary: Bilbo ponders Adventure.
Word Count: 100

There and Back Again



In the beginning, Adventure didn’t seem so bad. Riding his sturdy little pony behind the Dwarves and Gandalf, he enjoyed the unfamiliar hillsides and farms, sunshine, birdsong, the freshening breeze of early spring, and a merry old inn.

Then came the trolls.

He put that behind him in Rivendell, but goblins, Gollum, wolves, spiders --most of all, the Dragon and the battle afterward made him eager to see home once more.

Then he returned to the Shire. Telling of his time away, he found painted a brighter picture with his words. Adventure didn’t seem so bad at journey’s end.

Date: 2010-11-16 12:17 am (UTC)
shirebound: (Wander)
From: [personal profile] shirebound
I love that last line.

Date: 2010-11-16 12:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blslarner.livejournal.com
Things often seem better--or sometimes worse--in hindsight than they appeared at the time. Perfect use of the prompts!

Date: 2010-11-16 12:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] clodia-metelli.livejournal.com
That's perfect -- I sympathise so with Bilbo, that transition from excitement to weariness to the painlessness of memory -- isn't that how it always happens? With so many things, not just Adventures...

Date: 2010-11-16 01:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bfb.livejournal.com
Haha, I was just talking about this with a friend. How even when you have a miserable experience, later on you remember it in a softer light. Very nice!

Date: 2010-11-16 01:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gamgeefest.livejournal.com
How soon one forgets!

Date: 2010-11-16 03:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] labourslamp.livejournal.com
This is so true! I love how Bilbo's attitude switches from one extreme to another and back again--not that he hasn't matured, but that he's matured enough to appreciate an adventure in its own right.

Date: 2010-11-16 04:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] periantari.livejournal.com
Telling of his time away, he found painted a brighter picture with his words.
Love that line! I really like this drabble of changed perspective from Bilbo. :)

Date: 2010-11-16 01:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thunderatiger.livejournal.com
I like the way you used the title as Bilbo went there and then went back again with his words. The return visit, when one is not physically present, is often quite a bit different. And having lived through the experience and having time gloss away some of the nastier details would indeed make for a much more pleasant adventure. A very perceptive little drabble!

Date: 2010-11-16 05:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wormwood-7.livejournal.com
As other's have said, that last line is brilliant. Adventure filtered and shaped by the stories we tell afterwards.

Date: 2010-11-16 08:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mercuries.livejournal.com
Aha, this is so lovely and Bilbo-ish and so true to how people behave. Beautiful!

Date: 2010-11-17 12:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lindahoyland.livejournal.com
A lovely glimpse of Bilbo.

Date: 2010-11-17 05:03 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] paranoidangel
I like how Bilbo goes from loving the adventure, to the scary bits, and then making the adventure exciting and less scary in the re-telling. That's usually how it works.

Date: 2010-11-17 07:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] antane.livejournal.com
True, adventures don't seem so much fun at times until they are over and the memories begin.

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

Date: 2010-11-17 09:41 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] pearltook1
Indeed, it can all look so much better when you've survived it and are in your comfortable home again!

Lovely, Dreamflower!

Date: 2010-11-20 04:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keiliss.livejournal.com
This sums up the whole 'adventure' business rather well. Great when you start out, dark and quite unpleasant in places later, but a great tale to share with an admiring audience. Just - maybe not something you'd care to repeat.

Date: 2010-11-20 05:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mrowe.livejournal.com
I can only add my agreement to what everyone has already said. Perspective really is everything.

Date: 2010-11-26 03:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] someplacetobe.livejournal.com
I chuckled when reading; the last line seemed to sum up Bilbo so very well!

Date: 2010-12-01 03:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] someplacetobe.livejournal.com
I've always imagined Bilbo repeating his stories to generations of young hobbits.
As have I which was why I was so very delighted to read this story!

Date: 2010-12-11 02:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] foxrafer.livejournal.com
I love how the first and last lines are like bookends of each other. Lovely drabble.

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