Date: 2014-02-16 05:27 pm (UTC)
Spelling seems fine (very proper British English :) ) only thing I notice is one sentence

“There were many strange tales told about you when I first came to Gondor. Who knows how many are believed still?” said Faramir.

It seems odd that Faramir would "first come to Gondor" as he was already there. Perhaps it was meant as when Aragorn first came?

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