A lovely story. I like the concept of Miriel writing to Nerdanel, and the way you handled it seems natural and believable and not too dependent on "magic."
"...the Valar love us in their way, but there is among them, always, a kind of incomprehension of our limits that makes them callous." The best explanation I've seen!
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Date: 2014-01-06 04:25 am (UTC)"...the Valar love us in their way, but there is among them, always, a kind of incomprehension of our limits that makes them callous."
The best explanation I've seen!