It's 100 words, and it followed the prompt. You've got a good grasp on the drabble.
And cliched Frodo angst this may be, but it's not shabby cliched Frodo angst--the end, showing the way his memories have blocked his way from reality, is pretty fresh and disorienting.
(If you'd kept at it for longer than 100 words, though, I probably would have OD'd on it, so in that sense you really do have a good grasp on the drabble.)
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Date: 2010-11-16 03:55 am (UTC)And cliched Frodo angst this may be, but it's not shabby cliched Frodo angst--the end, showing the way his memories have blocked his way from reality, is pretty fresh and disorienting.
(If you'd kept at it for longer than 100 words, though, I probably would have OD'd on it, so in that sense you really do have a good grasp on the drabble.)