ext_20844 ([identity profile] lindahoyland.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] lotrchallenges2010-01-11 03:11 am

The Sweetest Song


Author: Linda Hoyland
Title: The Sweetest Song
Rating: G
Theme: January Potluck Challenge, Nightingale
Summary: Arwen ponders her future.

 

The moon shone brightly illuminating Arwen’s path as she strolled through the gardens. In a nearby tree a nightingale sang sweetly.

 

Arwen felt a sudden pang. Would there be songbirds in her new home, or even trees? Tomorrow she would leave Imladris, perhaps never to return. How she would miss the beloved places she had dwelled throughout her long life.

 

Yet, soon she would have a new home, one with the man who had won her heart. Together they would raise a family. Her new life was just beginning. The song of love was sweeter even than the nightingale’s melody.
shirebound: (Sing Me Home - Baylor)

[personal profile] shirebound 2010-01-25 04:48 pm (UTC)(link)
"The song of love"... that's beautiful.

[identity profile] ceshaughnessy.livejournal.com 2010-01-26 01:07 am (UTC)(link)
Arwen made a difficult choice, but the only one that was right for her. Lovely story!!
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[personal profile] dreamflower 2010-01-26 01:53 am (UTC)(link)
I love the use of the nightingale in this-- it ties back so wonderfully to Luthien, and helps to show the connection Arwen had with her ancestress.

Yes, she will miss her original home--and I love how it all comes down to that last sentence!

[personal profile] pearltook1 2010-01-26 03:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Very beautiful, Linda! I'm teary. There was indeed great beauty and joy awaiting her.

[identity profile] labourslamp.livejournal.com 2010-01-26 11:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Beautifully bittersweet. Thank you!

[identity profile] blslarner.livejournal.com 2010-01-30 07:28 am (UTC)(link)
Ah--we were both drawn to Arwen and the nightingale! Wonderful! So perfect! And this is so likely--so likely a scenario as she prepares for her new married life. Lovely, Linda!

[identity profile] periantari.livejournal.com 2010-01-30 02:40 pm (UTC)(link)
The song of love was sweeter even than the nightingale’s melody.
How beautifully sweet~ so much was said in 100 words!
Good job!

[identity profile] mrowe.livejournal.com 2010-01-31 12:02 pm (UTC)(link)
This is lovely; and her decision can't have been easy, but she made the right choice.

[identity profile] wendwriter.livejournal.com 2010-01-31 05:55 pm (UTC)(link)
I melted when I read this!

[identity profile] wendwriter.livejournal.com 2010-02-01 09:15 am (UTC)(link)
No, I'm afraid not. I nicked it off the internet. :D

It's that grinning expression on its face - couldn't resist!